Friday, September 24, 2010


My "good-heart" what should I tell you?
You are not so good at heart as you used to be.
I don't know what terrible thing had happened,
That our hearts were broken; no you broke my heart.
Whatever I do, you measure me in the scales of
Standards you've built for yourself.
"There used to be a great something between us";
Now it is broken; in vain I try to join it getting hurt everytime by you.
Why my "good-heart" have you become "hard-heart";
That you call my heart fake and shameless,
To love you even after the hard times you've given me?
Oh "good-heart"! I don't want to prove myself before you,
For anything; I hope against hope that you will stand in my shoes
And understand my heart.


  1. For anything; I hope against hope that YOU will stand in MY shoes
    And understand MY heart.
    (Or, may be, it is my head!)

  2. Thank you for the comment. :) But I would like to know who this is.

  3. Lakshmi,

    Again you are sitting up till after midnight. Go to bed at 9 pm. And when you feel hurt and pained try to look at things from the other persons point of view and then let go. Because you have to acknowledge the other persons point of view also. That is the toughest part of loving. You can't demand anything. Only give!

    From the advice itself you will know who it is.

    editing: The time here is 5 pm not the 5 am I am seeing in the comment. So may be you posted yours at 1 pm!

  4. Yes I understood. :) Thank you. :)